The Sad Unknowability of Dilip Singh
Tanuj Solanki
The never-to-be-famous writer Dilip Singh died of his own
hand in the winter of two thousand and six. He was twenty-nine. His mother
returned from her grocery rounds on the unfortunate day of his death and found
him hanging from the ceiling fan, one of her plain widow’s saris wrapped
tightly around his strained neck. In the hope that her son still had some life
in him, she drew a chair (the same chair that Dilip had toppled earlier)
beneath his feet and mounted another to untie the noose. Failing to do that,
she noticed the loosened plaster around the hook that held the ceiling fan, and
in her panic she began to pull the body downward. Some plaster and cement fell
on her face, but the body could not be set free. It never occurred to her that
had she managed to free it, the heavy ceiling fan, which was from an era when it
was made of metal, would have crushed them both.
Dilip’s choice wasn’t something that the circumstances, or
my understanding of them, added up to. To say that he was a writer is not to
say much, for the label is a problematic one. He had started writing when he
was twenty-three. He wrote poems initially, and the only people who ever read
or heard these were his close friends, who did so only reluctantly, for the
poems spoke of a coming apocalypse or a love long lost or the inescapable
misery of life, and Dilip’s friends, all as young as he was, could not find in
them anything to connect with. The more sensitive ones liked to point out that
Dilip’s poems were dishonest, for he had himself never experienced anything
traumatic, and so when he talked of ‘grey skies that gave out a grey piss’, or
of ‘love’s half-life’, or of ‘a beggar’s prayers for no rains that season’, he
sounded phony. I was a friend of Dilip’s, probably closer to him than the
others, and I too had similar feelings about his early poetry. In one-to-one
conversations I would ask him where he was getting his ideas from. His answers
were never satisfactory. He would say that a poet’s primary condition is to be
ever-sentient of death, or that a poet who doesn’t know love’s loss is not a
poet, or that misery is the automobile that rams us into the wall of death, et
cetera. With hindsight, I have come to understand that phase as one where he
was struggling to find his feet in the quagmire that is literature. I also
suspect that it was all under the duress of some broken love affair that none
of his friends had ever been aware of.
But Dilip and his work changed. Between two thousand and
one and four he was excited about writing prose poems of the sort where a
collection of seemingly disparate paragraphs hint at an elusive core (these
might be his words), and although he continued to write of death and misery and
betrayal, his work now combined a sense of privacy with all that. The prose
poems registered in one’s heart as having been written by a suffering
individual. They had in them the scratches of defeat, a defeat not felt or
read or imagined, but a defeat experienced in the real. Perhaps this is an
effect that he created by simply turning to a first person voice that was more
nuanced than his earlier voices. For example, the grey sky did not give out a
grey piss any more. It went like this: ‘After it rained, I walked on the road
looking down, but the vision didn’t change even if I looked up to the sky.
Everything was the colour of my mind.’
The reasons of this apparent melancholy still escaped me.
I tried to talk about it, which was easier now as Dilip was far less obnoxious
than he had been earlier. We sat on the seafront at Marine Drive on many
occasions, where he would read his latest work to me. Even though the subject
of his writing was almost always too serious, I assumed he was happy, for he
did give off a certain confidence that stemmed from the improvement in his
writing. Conversely, he told me that the grave nature of what he wrote about
surprised him as well, and might just be a by-product of the grave voices of
the writers that he was reading in those days. I remember how this statement had
calmed me, and also how honest it had seemed to me, simply because it had in it
the elements of a confession. Whether his work of that time could be called
original or not, I do not know. Although I do feel sad that no one will ever be
able to give an authoritative answer. The little that I have quoted is from
what I have remembered over the years.
And then, almost as if out of a perverse logic, Dilip was
struck by real pain: his father died of a massive heart failure. I and other
friends went to Dilip’s house to express our condolences. There I saw Dilip,
standing in a corner of the living room where he would eventually end his life.
He looked stunned rather than distraught. He did not utter a single word to any
of us, and so we all considered it better to leave and allow the family to
grieve for their loss.
Two weeks later I received a phone call from him. He
sounded excited, which confused me. He told me that he had written a large
prose poem that a magazine of national circulation had decided to publish in
their upcoming issue. The impropriety of such a reaction only two weeks after
losing a father bothered me, but I nevertheless congratulated Dilip
wholeheartedly. He wanted me to meet him at Marine Drive the next day, so that
he could read this poem to me. I agreed.
The poem was about a ten year old boy who had a world of
his own, a lush strange world full of the most esoteric notions. It was
difficult to understand, not merely because of the complexities of language.
Then there came a revelatory passage, in which the child watches his father hit
his mother with a rod, and then a sequence where the mother shows the mark of
that violence to the child. The details of the mother baring her thigh to the
child to show him the mark were unnerving. Without a doubt, this was a personal
experience, although the end, where the child buries that rod under a tree,
might have been fabricated. Initially, after Dilip had finished reading, I was
hesitant to show any reaction at all. But then I told him that what he had
written seemed to me like something that had happened to him. Dilip grew silent
and stared at the horizon for what seemed a long time. When we resumed talking
it was on an entirely different topic, and then we got up and went to a nearby
café to have some cold coffee. The poem was deliberately forgotten. Although I
remember how in the taxi ride back home that day, I had thought of it as a
veritable masterpiece.
Dilip called me a couple of days later. It was quite late
in the night, and I could only hear an incoherent blabbering from the other
side. It was as if he was heavily intoxicated, which was strange because I knew
that Dilip never drank. I could not think of anything better to do than to cut
the call and reach out to him later. Next morning, when I visited Dilip’s house
on my way to work, his mother told me that he had left the previous night. He
has gone to the Himalayas for some time, she said, and also added something
about how disturbed he had been since his father’s demise. I was confused, but
then I shrugged my shoulders and got on with my life. What else could I do?
I did, of course, retain some interest in my friend, and
so the next month I got a copy of the magazine where his work should have been
published. It was not there! My confusion regarding him was now mixed with
guilt, for I thought that maybe he chose not to publish the poem because I had
found it to be so personal. I rang his house, but his mother told me that he
had still not returned. She had no contact number or address, and had no clue
about the poem due to be published in the magazine. For a while I wondered if
Dilip had lied to me about being accepted for publication. But why would he do
that? To make me view his poem with respect, with approval? It made me ask
questions of myself: had I thought of the poem as a masterpiece because it
was due for publication? This would mean that Dilip had conned me, and that I
had conned myself too. Now I wasn’t even sure if his father had really hit his
mother with an iron rod. And if that wasn’t true, was the poem then a
masterpiece because it had appeared so real and personal?
It was six more months before Dilip finally returned to
Bombay – with a large beard and webby eyes. He had decided to be jobless, he
told me on our first meeting; apparently his father had left behind a large sum
of insurance money. We got into the habit of meeting at Marine Drive every
Saturday evening, where he would read some of his writings to me. I kept my
distance emotionally and never broached the topic of the unpublished poem. He
was writing short stories now, short stories that seldom had more than two
characters who met each other for the first and the last time inside the story.
Either he never sought publication or was never accepted by anyone. I felt that
he didn’t have anything substantial to write about, and was therefore writing
about the transitory nature of human encounters, how we grow intimate with
strangers and then part without much ado. While this template persisted in
general, the settings and the tones and the timelines changed dramatically from
story to story, and the intensity of the connection that the two characters
felt for each other also varied substantially. Sometimes there would be a third
party, or an object or an idea that was important to both the characters. As
weeks passed, as those weeks became months, September October November, as life
settled into a routine for me and probably also for Dilip, I began to enjoy
these weekly rendezvous and came to be excited about knowing the identities of
the two strangers that my friend would set in a story next. And then that
Friday morning in late December – I was at work, probably toiling on a
presentation or a spreadsheet. There was a tiny suicide note, in which he
blamed himself and nobody else. In the days that followed, I took it upon
myself to comfort his mother as much as I could. I would visit her every other
day. It was in one of these meetings that she narrated her struggle with
Dilip’s strangulated body. She eventually came to tell me that Dilip had burnt
all his writing before hanging himself. She told me that she had noticed flakes
of ash drifting on the living room floor before she had looked up to find her
son. Then she cried, and then I cried, and the crying went on till it exhausted
itself, at which point the silence became so oppressive that I ran out of the
house.
Tanuj Solanki
is a fiction writer based in Bombay, India. His work has been published in
large and small magazine, such as The Caravan, Out of Print,
nether, elimae, and others. He has been nominated for the
Pushcart Prize, and one of his stories featured in wigleaf magazine's list of
best online fiction 2012. You can write to him at tanuj.solanki@gmail.com . His twitter handle is @tanujsolanki .
a perfectly strange and sad story with a great title.
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